I thought this was a cute story, but definitely an early one for the author. You can just tell that she’s gotten better with more practice. The storytelling is not quite there yet, it’s a bit anticlimactic with the ending being a little unexpected. I also feel like the tone jumps around from cute and fluffy to oh my god suddenly we are seeing the main character be brutally stabbed by a character who was previously sort of a good guy who has lost it. The tragedy of the other characters makes it harder to enjoy what could have been an otherwise kind of fluffy story. Having dark and cute/funny elements side by side is not inherently a problem, but it has to be done with finesse and this story just didn’t pull it off. I enjoyed it though overall.
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