queerdinosuar's manga / #Sci-fi(3)

Honestly this was pretty disappointing. There are a lot of potentially interesting plot lines introduced but then they are dropped and everything is thrown together rather haphazardly. Not to mention the problem of all the important emotional conversations and moments happening off screen. It really takes the momentum out of the story and ruins the romance in this romance comic. The author needs a lesson in “show don’t tell”. That said, if it’s the author’s first comic I am willing to cut them some slack while they learn and improve their storytelling. Not a bad attempt for a first comic.

I absolutely love this comic so far. It is funny and silly and the story is pretty good. It makes me laugh every chapter but also has some good sex and romance thrown in. The only thing I don’t like is that K makes a habit of fucking Rabby while he’s asleep, which is fucked up and non-consensual. But honestly my standards for this genre are so low that if that’s my only problem to look past, it’s better than most. The story at the end feel flat a little. I guess it felt kinda anticlimactic given that we were meant to believe that there was going to be a big reveal and showdown at the end, but it was just Kylot’s brother with a birthday party and an unclear reason why Kylot was trying to get there in the first place. There was an emotional climax of Rabby being deceived by Kylot but that was not even properly addressed or explained… Overall I really liked it and it’s probably one of my favorites, but there are definitely some things I would change.