MrJ's manga / #BL comic writer(1)

The Baker on the First Floor

Complete | GyaGa | 2016 released

In the first chapters, I have to admit, the plot and the graphics weren't so "exceptional", the story was too trivial and the graphics wasn't clear, rather there were a lot of double lines and approximated signs. But, during the chapters, the author has got better the graphics cleaning it from the double lines, all the characters are more definite and get traits more masculine. The only trait negative is about the general presentation of some situation, the graphics is as definite and well-made in situation seen in details, in foreground, as undefinete in generical set-up where all seems approximate. The plot also become more intricate, always on a linear base, but with a lots of divagations. In general it is a very nice manhwa to read, addresses important issues without deepening them and, even if it is explicit, does not present upsetting situations.