Real good and real stuff, with Sousuke's complex. I can totally understand his feeling of being "unworthy" of the life and love being gifted to him... (I don't bode well with his personality, but, still. it's a very human way to cope)
But why in the absolute FUCK did he have to jerk off his little brother-- it was totally unnecessary plot wise, all ya had to do was turn that scene into some "lucky sukebe" type stuff or smth
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