its good! im interested to read the rest! only thing that might put people off is jerry having routes with his brothers, but he actively tries to avoid them and realizes its not because theyre thinking indecent thoughts about him, its just programmed that way
ch 52 jerry says he doesnt like men and never will <- pet peeve
ch 66, the end. it felt...really rushed? like it came to a screeching halt
To deny the route