dylan's manga / #shit art(2)

UHM??? NGL the story is fuckin shit bro like??? it feels so rushed, the characters have little character development, there wasn't much honestly i just skimmed thru n i alr got the gist, i don't mind the r@p€ parts but like the plot is rlly shit lol

it's fucking shit lol it feels rushed there's potential maybe if the art was gud but even if it was then the plot should also need to be retouched, the characters did go thru very little character development but it was VERY LITTLE like the seme maybe considered the uke's feelings but the uke is still stupid as ever idk lol i stopped at 17 i couldn't bear reading it