Fruit of the Tongue
hmm its actually gud but like it's so short lol the author prolly got tired of thinking
Put a Smile On
UHM??? NGL the story is fuckin shit bro like??? it feels so rushed, the characters have little character development, there wasn't much honestly i just skimmed thru n i alr got the gist, i don't mind the r@p€ parts but like the plot is rlly shit lol
Love is not real
it's fucking shit lol it feels rushed there's potential maybe if the art was gud but even if it was then the plot should also need to be retouched, the characters did go thru very little character development but it was VERY LITTLE like the seme maybe considered the uke's feelings but the uke is still stupid as ever idk lol i stopped at 17 i couldn't bear reading it
Stalker's Game
i was frustrated on some parts that i just wanted to end it lol i wasn't looking for sum revenge so the ending was kinda gud to me, the seme is actually the only one who needed therapy but the uke was mentally weak lol there's no character development, they're still both shit but gud thing that uke realized shit at the end lol the seme is still the same bastard w a lil bit of genuinity, i kinda understand where the seme is going from since i also had that kind of thinking but it woulda been better if they both went to therapy lol
Stockholm syndrome
ok so uh it's actually gud? but like there's no character development whatsoever?? like S1 literally ended w uke filled w guilt then S2 started w uke still living w guilt but somehow seme got rich??!? wasn't he a broke ass like 10 yrs ago?! also 9 yrs in prison but for some reason he only spent a year in school then suddenly became rich ?? WTF happened in that year lol it doesn't make any sense
Mayday mayday mayday!
the art is soooo cute n somewhat my type n the humor is def my type but the plot is kinda hmm gud? but rotten it's like it's alive but rotting away yk that kinda thing now the reason why i said this is that first he clearly got raped like bruh seme LITERALLY threatened his life uke knows what happens if he declined then that goes on n on, they said they r in a "relationship" but none of them even confessed their feelings towards eo so clearly IT WASNT A RELATIONSHIP i was soooo frustrated w how these characters think at all! it was like looking at kids except it's adults w poor view of how love works! they fucked twice n suddenly seme wanted a relationship?? OUT OF WHAT REALLY THE RELATIONSHIP IS MADE OUT OF WHAT EXACTLY EXPLAIN URSELF SEME!! gud thing uke isn't THAT DUMB BUT I HATE HOW KIND HE IS LIKE GIIRRLLL THAT MAN RAPED U N U WANT TO SAVE HIS LIFE?? R U FUCKING STUPID???!?! but again i understand that it's his cousin also abt that again he said "I'll never have feelings for u" toward his cousin CAN WE PLEASE CONSIDER THE FACT THAT ITS HIS COUSIN OFC U ARENT SUPPOSED TO HAVE ANY ROMANTIC FEELINGS TOWARDS HIM this is why the plot is rotten lol it's there but slowly rotting away, i actlly rlly like the humor but it's like the author didn't even consider basic human relations, SEME overstepped a lot of boundaries n uke just let it happen, he literally developed sth similar to Stockholm syndrome thats why he developed those feelings even tho he didn't actually liked him in conclusion, frustration n confusion is what I got from this: cute but rotten. false love even
Making a Child with a Beast
lmaooooo i kinda hate the way the uke views females lol the seme is kinda gud but also i kinda don't like him bc of the thing he did w the uke :/ no one would want that honestly that was kinda unfair on his part, rape part is fine the rest r gud, i don't hate the characters but the way they think kinda bothers me lol
Sura's Lover