Body Complex
It was a great idea but I wanted more. Maybe just a bit more daddy conflict to make the solution a bit more satisfying. But it did have a great ending.
Hit Me!
Was good. But it didn't wrap up nicely enough
Viper
I didn't think the viper dude would handle things this way, but it was AWESOME. The two plot twists were great and I loved it. I just want to see more though! This needs to be full length!
Imperfect Pervert
It was dark and twisty but it was missing something I can't quite figure out. Maybe I wasn't a fan of how we got the bits and pieces of the past that he had forgotten. It just seemed like that part could have been a tad better. Also I wanted to feel Seme's hatred way more.
Over Heat(Chamji)
It's f'd up, but he deserved it.
Paid(Fujoking)
Amnesia, Revenge, reencounter with first love, lort this has EVERYTHING
The Pawn's Revenge