Legs That Won't Walk
-More plot holes than swiss cheese -Oh the fucking ableism is so annoying -Sure, use the same amnesia plot device twice, we’re so entertained -Nothing gets said unless it’s suddenly a plot point, no feeling of continuity -I fucking hate Min Hyuk and his fucking shit raping of an unconscious person -Hate how characters keep changing heights and sizes depending on how dominant/like the top they’re supposed to look like. Like pretty sure Min Hyuk used to be smaller and leaner in the beginning but Yaoi Logic I FUCKING GUESS -This is so miserable and so dramatic while simultaneously anticlimactic, like you set up a plot hook AND NEVER FUCKING USE IT. WHY. ARE. YOU. NOT. WRITING. A. DECENT. STORY. WHEN. YOU. LITERALLY. INVENTED. THE. POSSIBILITY. FOR. A. COOL. PLOT. AND. PLOT. TWISTS. AND. WHY THE FUCK ARE. SHITTY. SOAP. OPERA. MOMENTS. INVENTED. INSTEAD. They feel so fucking meaningless. Like there could be a great story in there. But. Noooo. We hate cohesiveness and continuity in this house I fucking guess. -Also if there is one more flashback or repeating of panels I’m fucking chucking my phone into a meat grinder. FUCK. -I’ll never get back the time I spent reading this. Fuck. -What the hell is wrong with the side story?? It’s fucking horrible and disgusting and I just wanted them to have like one chapter of peace and harmony. -Also: Min Hyuk, go die in a fucking ditch
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