sea_nettle_sapphic's manga / #straight X gay(3)

i could complain about the terrible one dimensional characters but it's a fetish piece so actually, whatever like it's not good so idk what to rate it, not more than 2 points whatever the case but does it really earn those 2? something I do want to point out, though it's kinda irrelevant, is that those 3d models really take away from the art. using the flower pot scenes as an example, it's either there or it's not, we're not shown the motion of it so initially I thought the key went under the tan pot.. it's jarring too, honestly, like imagine if it was like this for the writing? having a character development without seeing the cause? it's silly! and it's missing a key opportunity to show the characters interacting with the world, missing an opportunity to show something more about the characters (well, in this case there's not really anything else to them besides fetish fantasy) perhaps he could have lifted it swiftly, still in the squat, and perhaps he lifted it higher than he needed to, with the same excited beam (I think in this panel the expression does fit, but in the rest of it GOSHHH I was so annoyed like "wheeeew :D could have been bad if i got beat to death :3") showing his earnest and excitement in this action mannerisms are revealing! but we don't get to see them because everything is put in like legos

i wish the middle aged man was with the old man in the end but maybe it's still sweet? the author wrote it really well so it's not jarring there being a high school student but it's still a high school student I liked sensei's meddling scene but I think I'd prefer if it progressed from there that high schooler got a sweet school romance and the old man got with sensei and by treating the younger's as just a crush, endearing, but nothing more the old man in this situation should have the understanding to do that even so, it was written really sweetly so if I don't think I can enjoy it well I enjoyed sensei being bullied from all sides (it's really cute, I love you boring middle aged man ♡)

so hot