sea_nettle_sapphic's manga / #school life(167)

6/10 cute and sweet highschool romance between boys

ch 2, it's gonna be order of death isn't it Ch 4 the plot twists seem quite stiff lol. person goes up > gives a view > argument ensues. least professional teacher. vol 2. ch 9. 5/10

read this where no one can see you. there is snot and tears streaking my face. sweating somehow too... not sure how or why when it's freezing cold

I, for one, did not foresee the plot twist. good lord.

cried my eyes out. lovely jovely. In the beginning, the writing was lacking; it said how 6 months had passed though it was written like 6 WEEKS had passed. there were times when it felt too fast, or there were events that were skipped over, like an in-joke that the author assumed we knew but hadn't been shown to the viewer. The pacing improved really quite quickly, the majority is perfect. I really really love this story and I feel it's truly 5 stars, despite the beginning. Now that I've reached the end, i can look back and enjoy those early chapters, so it's not a massive qualm. what did make me laugh and what I think should be changed (but it doesn't ruin it and it's just because I'm being nitpicky) is donghee looking anywhere between 4-6 but somehow after two years is 13???? what able-bodied 11 year old needs to be accompanied to the bath? needs help washing? and the tiny tiny little apron tangled him up???????? it amuses me... author, have him be eight now. have him grow two years and be eight. please

suicidal was not treated like suicide, bizarre to include, cute besides that. sorry I'm tired so my writing is bad.