sea_nettle_sapphic's manga / #Smut(169)

i did feel upset in the heart squeezing moments but the culmination wasn't that satisfying... I think the mangakas needs to do a bit more push to make the pull more worth it.. I think them getting together should be written differently, given more weight, more time. that moment is the release of every romance story and needs to be given more effort, therefore.

want more of the first couple (I'm attached)

good potential, nice ending, need more push and pull to feel worth it (make my heat cry!)

ch4

Ahhhhhhhh so cute! the different tone but same words same beginning and end ohhhhh my goooddd so good fetish riddled mangaka but actually really good at writing heart tugging stories (crazy, this is crazy, I really liked this? low-key?)