sea_nettle_sapphic's manga / #Smut(126)

god I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish there was space to dwell on the ending before the extra,, it's manga culture but maybe it isn't always necessary I loved this so much beautifully crafted! elegant writing

BDSM YURI!!! love the character designs, leaving a comment to hopefully get over the noisy yuri haters (you don't like it? either make your own or shut up and move on! others do)

I liked it initially but it's quite rushed so there is no opportunity to see the emotions outside of the key dialogue. As a result, the reader may doubt what the characters' words try to convince us of

no chasing arc because mangaka likes whiny ukes (cute)

A FOOL! IT'S CUTE! SWEET AND TENDER ROMANCE!

I love that ending! I want to let it simmer in my heart so I'll come back to the ending later

i could complain about the terrible one dimensional characters but it's a fetish piece so actually, whatever like it's not good so idk what to rate it, not more than 2 points whatever the case but does it really earn those 2? something I do want to point out, though it's kinda irrelevant, is that those 3d models really take away from the art. using the flower pot scenes as an example, it's either there or it's not, we're not shown the motion of it so initially I thought the key went under the tan pot.. it's jarring too, honestly, like imagine if it was like this for the writing? having a character development without seeing the cause? it's silly! and it's missing a key opportunity to show the characters interacting with the world, missing an opportunity to show something more about the characters (well, in this case there's not really anything else to them besides fetish fantasy) perhaps he could have lifted it swiftly, still in the squat, and perhaps he lifted it higher than he needed to, with the same excited beam (I think in this panel the expression does fit, but in the rest of it GOSHHH I was so annoyed like "wheeeew :D could have been bad if i got beat to death :3") showing his earnest and excitement in this action mannerisms are revealing! but we don't get to see them because everything is put in like legos