krillin's manga / #smut(4)

Beginning of the story was mainly smut, to the point where I put this one on hold for a loooong time. Like a couple years. Come back and low and behold, plot happens and it's decent. A lot of the plots were kinda unexplained? Like Beom's amnesia episode, some of the political stuff was too vague and a little confusing for me. The side stories are where it's at. Literally the best closer I've seen for a story and it actually brought me tears. Very very nice story and glad I finished it after all this time.

BWAT moment with a pale sickly lookin man and a tan king lmfaooo. I think this story suffered from having just TOO many characters it was a bit hard to keep track of. The plot felt like a washed out version of UTGL, but it was still enjoyable regardless.

I WISH ILIC SAID HE LOVED SAYAN SMHHH My only complaint is that even after a time skip of TEN YEARS Ilic is still like "ew, I hate this". Like at that point I really think you'd be at least stockholmed. And pre time skip it seemed like he was catching feelings. So like? But this is prolly the hottest mc I've ever seen sooo

The ML was like slightly too stoic, I would have liked to see him break a bit more often. Mc was generic boy paying off his father's debt. But I surprisingly don't think he ever pissed me off or did anything overtly stupid. Which is a nice change of pace.