Not your typical yaoi story because it had a good premise for 3P; however, what bothered me was that the author tried to correct the situation by the end, which was pretty anticlimactic. Why build up on the possibility of having a 3P when they weren't (SPOILER) gonna end up together. Plus, it was open ended which leaves you in a wtf state of mind after reading.
Nureru Karada (YAMAKAMI Riyu)