Retaking Romance
Complete | Bareum | 2022 released
This one is very confusing.. who’s the blonde roommate? What’s his story? Like “oh he helped me once” and “i can live with my dad now” *everyone is happy* – wtf? What was wrong with his father.. ok the relationship of the secondary couple is not needed to be explained well, but the main couple.. like.. they didn’t even have a proper talk.. the main guy was betrayed but believed again so easily. This part with jobs, spying… uugh I can’t I just want to redo it so it’s deeper and has a better flow
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