grumpyface:]'s manga / #One-star(6)

The second couple is cute, but still I didn’t really resonate with this read so it’s a one-star hit after all

I had SOME expectations for this BL because of the other work of the artist. I was disappointed though because writing wasn’t very good. The art was beautiful, the premise full of potential, the dynamic and characters quite promising as well, but turned out the plot was riddled with holes, the action lackluster, the dialogue illogical at times, and the elements of the narrative disharmonious. It’s painful to read, but the art and spicy scenes seemed to be the main attraction the team focused on in this project, so it was still there if that’s what one likes. I like them too, except I can’t fully enjoy it if the other important aspects of the story have been half-assed. I really tried getting through to the end (that’s always my intention and I often accomplish that when I’m reading something) but it bored me to death. I lost great interest in the nonsense and just skipped to the end. The art is top-notch, but the overall work is way overrated

This is just gibberish. Full of plot holes and the development between the characters is so unnatural. A lot of information has been skipped and this is painful to read unless you’re just after the erotica. Well, I’m not and I desperately need living, breathing characters to enjoy a book. This is just a note for me bc I know I’m being pretty harsh towards the writer. This is not for me.

The art seemed nice… but then the characters are deprived. For me, cheating is a turn off, even more than an awful drawing. If there was a block button to the stories, I would block this.