grumpyface:]'s manga / #It’s okay(3)

The story telling is flat… I just don’t feel there’s anything surprising or exciting happening… and certain scenes are lame and pure nonsense. The art is great though

It’s okay. The concept is good, the line art is good. The plot line is not complex and the meaning are not deep enough for me though.

What “love”? That’s more like loving the sexual chemistry. No emotional exploration and resolution (which is more my cup of tea)