Casey's manga / #Martial Arts(1)

There will be three parts to this comment the first part will be my thoughts on formatting with no spoilers the second will be my thoughts on the story with some spoilers I have read all chapters up to 199 because that is all that is available and Part three is my fixing summary because it sucks Part 1 (no spoilers) Personally I like it when you scroll down to read and a chapter has like 7 pages because lower loading time and less clicking just mindless scrolling but from chapters 176-199(199 is most recent chapter) it has been each chapter has about 40 pages and sometimes pages don't take up the full screen so I found this a lot more annoying to read Now this is Part of Part 1 but it has like extremely small spoilers and I think people should know this before reading It has romance at some points he was making a girl fall for him staying they would get married then like literally 2 chapters later both the main character and the girl just like forget about it and go back to interacting the same was as before the romance like they both forgot it ever happened Part two is below with some spoilers so don't read more of you don't want spoilers Part two is below with some spoilers so don't read more of you don't want spoilers Part two is below with some spoilers so don't read more of you don't want spoilers Part two(with spoilers) So at first it was really good but then he kinda stopped using the shadow system for sometimes like twenty chapters at a time he also rarely used the shadows and when he did it seemed kind of lacklustre for the first like 120 chapters he was not using shadow system because apparently people would freak out of they saw the shadows but then like 120 chapters in he just started using them in front of people not even disguising them as humans we saw him so this earlier with no explanation also I found once he got the second shadow it kinda started getting worse and worse for example once he apparently had like 20 shadows all with his power he just rarely used them and when he did they easily for defeated all of them but then he just defeated them himself easily even though it was stated they had the same power as him and it was also stated they gained intelligence to fight better so that made no sense so yea overall the "shadow system" that is ment to be the main point of the story and why I clicked on it is just insanely rarely used and when it is used it is used in the dumbest of ways Part 3 By coincidence, Li Yunmu found a super machine from humanity’s age of darkness. From that point onwards, his ordinary life would never be the same! Aptitude? Innate talent? What are these? Could they be eaten? I have neither aptitude nor innate skill, but my shadow can level up using hacks. Experience, Ability points, battle prowess…….all of them could be hacked. Even while he is asleep or tired, he could still increase his skills. [Ding, your shadow has killed an ant, you have gained experience points and ability points.] Ok so I'll start with first sentence of the summary "By coincidence, Li Yunmu found a super machine from humanity's age of darkness." Ok so where do I start on so firstly it was not a coincidence he also didn't find it and it isn't a machine he is in a world where people awaken abilities and the ability he awoke was the shadow system Now line two "From that point onwards, his ordinary life would not be the same! Aptitude? Innate talent? What are these? Can they be eaten?" There are only two correct things here firstly "what are these?" Might mean the shadows and " from that point onwards, his ordinary life would not be the same! " His life did change Now for the incorrect stuff firstly his aptitude sucked he took way more resources like 20x for half the improvement in his acupuncture points and there was 0 reference to eating anything at all Now for line 3 "I have neither aptitude nor innate skill, but my shadow can level up using hacks. Experience, Ability points, battle prowess…….all of them could be hacked. Even while he is asleep or tired, he could still increase his skills." Firstly this is the most correct part of entire thing but there is still some misleading things for example he rarely had his shadows hunt well he sleeps automatically I think there was one mention in like the 3rd or so chapter I guess latter on he hinted in his shadows body at night but he was still controlling it and it wasn't really auto hunting even though he unlocked auto hunting in chapter 3 he just never used it also hacking is just the wrong term he just did tasks and was rewarded with a gift box like 4 times in first 199 chapters Now for the last line "[Ding, your shadow has killed an ant, you have gained experience points and ability points.]" this is like the last one this happened once or twice in first two chapters and like never again