concave's manga / #Supernatural(18)

this is just insane in a bad way but like a trainwreck i cant take my eyes away??? like beyond the fucking insane plotline, story, names, TRAUMATIZING EVENTS, the story tries to go from A to B but they just cant make it work? its all a bit forced, youre moving things into place with a schedule rather than following a story thats happening. This is clinincal on multiple levels and this is so far from my usual story but FUCK IT im morbidly curious

now if this isnt the most scrumptious thing ever!!! I absolutely ADORE sayo, i too have a thing for cuties!!! and mr ml is giving suave, perfect words to make mc blush BUT mc and we get that inside look with the cat which I love!!! very cute devlopments, love the character design, everything about this is perfect!!! (im not the biggest fan of his brother but Im reading the raws (up to chap. 27) and his love interest is so cute but assertive and strong that i kinda llke him more by proxy? we move)

cute cute!!! i do love some domestic cohabitation, and i like the gradual falling in love realization!!! the side couple was also sweet but wow was it used to tie up loose ends lmaooo? also i like both forms, and all the height differences!! plus how there was companionship w the fellow skittle!! PLUS HOW THE BEGINNIGN OF THE STORY IS LITRERALLY ME WTF I WAS SCARED

FUCKKKK ITS CUTE. i usually dont like dungeon type aus, but this is hilarious! and i adore mc, and ml is very pretty w big eyelashes and i am a big fan! the plot of this also seems super interesting, im totally gonna go read the novel now

ok idk how to feel abt this... low end of 4? it started off boring, but i was incredibly endeared to mc, even with how clumsy the story and romance were? and the concept/hook was interesting and fun to read regardless! i liked blondie AS A FRIENDLY CHARACTER, bro couldnt we just get a friend and not drama pls... the real friend was pretty cool, i like how he's kinda his own thing but still invested in his childhood friend! THE PSYCHIATRIST BEING A SUPPORTING CHARACTER WAS CRAZYYYY but he tried ig! mr ml was a bit too honed in for my taste but oh well, i can see that being good for other ppl? I wouldve been much more comfy w the 4 star rating if it hadnt been for the blondie's weird storyline, and the literal last 2 chapters... someone's gotta upload ch.56 w just the cozy part and not the "its a hallucination" bit bc tbh that kinda ruined the fun... its endearing bc we go along w this implausible story and it helps along this implausible relationship, if you try to bring the concept back down to earth it just makes everything feel a bit silly and rushed (esp bc it was put in w telling, not showing) , but oh well! complicated emotions indeed, i was highkey speeding through this by the time we got to 30s bc its not rlly mything but i also cant justify a 3 lol ALSO MC LOVING LEO IS LOWKEY CRAZY RANDOM, LIKE HELP??? ITS SO FUNNY THROUGHOUT THE NARRATIVE AJSHFGAKJSFGA

IVE BEEN SAVED. fuck i need this to become a novel right fucking now. i really truly love this. the chapter coutn was so daunting at the beginning but now i totally need more!! i love love love qin and wang yi, they r both so pookie darling to me!! the whole plot/premise r interesting and wang yi just goes and makes everything sm more dynamic! the worlds have been pretty cool (I have 1 bone to pick: this author is too comfy making one love interest grow up w the other one but ig we move bc its like meta and theres no lovey scenes until older?) and i truly loved the diversity between all!! and esp seeing how qin inevitabily falls in each one bc wang yi is so pookie darling. the og reason for the system was compelling, but now that the real plot is developing its so fuckign cool!! it reminds me a bit of the storyline behind global examinatin? but mb bc this is a manhua and that was a novel im more willing to excuse tell not show type plot advancements. of which this story had a decent amount but i dont mind bc it was all given in natural conversation, with appropriate foreshadowing, and in tiny enough morsels that ur always wanting more! this is just so fucking good, it makes me wanna go find a quickflow transmigration novel now to fill the void (ALSO I LIEK THE SADISM. I WISH IT WAS MORE DEVELOPED/CONSISTENT BUT THAT SHITS SO REAL). i also rlly like the continuation of the arcs. first to get u hooked w the double role, but also relatively harmless. second to introduce the danngerous setting, and develop that its lov enot obsession. third seems short and harmless but its where we kick off the plot/double transmigration realization!! fourth for a bit of respite, let it be natural, but also introducing more complicated world elements. fifth in the og story (ATEEEEE), with more familiar elements to conclude the plot. AND i love how the mc often makes plans and they 100% dont go to plan, but he just says fuck it and eats up the new direction. i think ive gotten too used to mcs being op and making crazy intricate but smart plans and they work and they win and yay! while i obvs still enjoy that, its been fun to read this mc as more of a normal human, makes the love process (and later reveal) that much more satisfying!

YEAH THSI IS FUCKIG GOATED. AMAZING. ICNREDIBLE the plot is delish! the setting and tropes itself make the plot already pretty good, and then the direction the story takes is super good, i love how it started off lighthearted but then makes this tone switch into more storyline? but at the same time it doesnt take itself too seriously, and has the perfect amount of interesting elements balanced with visuals and romance for a manga. the fucking ghost stories hurt. the 2nd couple (I WILL THINK OF THEM THIS WAY) fucking hurt, and i love how we got to know the brother really well!! his dynamic with both ml and mc was super cute lol, and i lpve all the side characters (THE CAT) NOW ML AND MC. ADORABLE. granted, we didnt get much of the emotional side of them falling plainly presented but the tension was definitely built up well, and they might be one of my favorite couples when together. they just seem so natural and domestic, constantly showing love through actions and words, they feel rlly commited and i absolutely adored all their interactoions. OH AND I LOVE THE. ART. and i love how it def doesnt subscribe to typical bl stereotypes!! mc (uke?) is super strong, teasing, and wont let himself ever have a passive role even if he doesnt have the power. ml (seme?) is shy, prone to feeling insecure, but also a badass and super fucking strong. bithc i love them OH AND THE PAST LIVES. THE BBY YOON. THE FUVKING FLOWER. I DIDNT REALIZE SHIT UNTIL THE LAST BIT W THE RIBBON AND FUCK I CRIED SM OVER IT. the author absolutely devours, i loved how the past was used to bring sm things back around! and then back around again w the red flower. im happy that bitch properly died, even if i began to empathize w him (JUST A BIT). just really fucking great story, very sweet with the perfect touch of plot and angst

THIS SEME IS SUCH A CUTIEEEEE AH I LOVE HIM uke is also pretty chill!! and i totally get seme bc ya thats my type. this is like a shame application but slightly to the left (ill eat it up every time)