concave's manga / #Smut(3)

Better art/concept than execution. Again, the scene art is RLLY GOOD tho, this artist is knowledgeable and knows what is up, what needs to be done. Couple at the end was cute ig. In terms of the whole consideration, nothing bad but nothing too special

OFFICIALLY KILLING MYSELF WDYM THIS IS OVER THIS HAS BEEN ONE OF MY FAVS????? everythihng about them just makes so much sense, its perfect!!! I love the love at first sight, especially bc it was mutual!! Seme was being petty and immature at the beginning lmao, but its so obvious how that changed into teasing bc bro thought uke was cute... and like same bro SAME!!! plus, i love how uke doesn't immediately accept the apology and his crush goes away, he's rightfully mad and not a pushover until seme shows through ACTIONS (not breaking the promise he made) that he still cares. All the scenes are DELICIOUSSSSS (although i admit theyre super unrealistic bs bro's refractory period =0...), PLUS THEYRE SO CUTE WHEN THEY'RE DOMESTIC LIKE HUH???? and the supportive friends were very much appreictaed!!! plus i really like how seme wasn't just this stone, he was always into and affected by uke!!!! Like to him, he wasn't just "cute" but "hot," he treated him like an equal and not in this patronizing way??? PLUS THE SIBLINGS ARE ADORABLE THEY REMIND ME OF MY SIBLINGS, its an adorable way to do this family with kids trope!!! just eveyrhting about this was beautifyl, INCLUDING THE ART (although i admit it was a bit rough at the beginning), we love to see improvement!!! The author is also hilarious when reading the note, everyhting about this is aboslutely perfect and being fr im so upset abt there not being more chapters

I LET THIS MARINATE THE PERFECT AMOUNT, CAME BACK TO THE CHAPTER WHERE THEY STARTED DATING YESSSSSSS I absolutely adore this shit. in every single aspect. starts off quite crude, w tons of second hand embarassment, but SEME KNOWS HOW TO BE A SADIST. like no hitting and spanking, yay! and ENTIRELY just taking a kinda brat tamer appraoch (doesnt rlly match but whatever), and the WRITING, the MIRROR, the DACRYPHILIA, BRO KNOWS WHATS UPPPPP THIS AUTHOR DEVOURED W THE SEX I WAS SO SHOCKED AT EVERY NEW TROPE THAT WAS INTRODUCEDDDD, LIKE U LIKE THIS SHIT TOO?? ITS NOT JUST ME?? my fav portrayal of it so far in a manga i think! and then! the story started devloping, and the timeskips were so perfect that they cut out the extraneous materials while showing how they got comfortable with each other, and keeping the relation on a realistic timeline!! yes seme was fucked up for playing w uke's emotions, but the longing and begging and pining and crushing were perfect! no stone seme, bro was blushing and thinking and crying over, it felt like they were considering each other equals! and the "kind perfect uke" facade totally gets peeled back to reveal how much trauma there is back there, and it makes for a much more interest dimension to the "perfect but perverted x stone but perverted" trope (delicious in and of itself btw) that was introduced in the beginnig!! i adore this, and the idol setting only levels it up!! ok back w some posterity. after they get together, when dealing with the insecurities mc does kinda revert to streotypical uke weak characteristics, idk if its just a perspective thing but he doesnt talk much and most of it is abt his insecurity, i get that we need an arc to develop through the layers that got peeled back but this part is too in your face, and seme plays too much of an almost guardian role? for me to feel this... idk its too much, the beginning still stands strong and delish but it feels liek the author kidna lost grasp of the plot/delish flavor of the beginning, but overall this still is a 4.5?