ayo!! this is really fucking good actually
it starts in the beginning with a goofy, implausible, but fun story (uke's antics, seme's willingness), but then theres a total tone switch in the middle chapters? and at first its a bit offputting but it does provide a totally reasonable explaantion for all the silly stuff at the beginning, and bring u back down to earth a bit. while uke def fucks up here (his whole og intentions), the author reveals it at a part where we can actually see that he starts falling, and also includes a kinda mirrored monologue from seme to show that he kinda catches on? and in the end uke acts lkike a bit of a bitch and it (deservedly, reasonably) explodes in his face, but their argyment is so fucking real and im proud of seme for getting it all out!! he truly is too good for uke, too good for any of us (and i adore him), but ya theyre still together bc uke's explanation is reasonable and real and u can tell hes properly in love now, and then theyre just cute!!! the scenes r all delish and actually uke's too fucking relatable w the introvert stuff :(((
i also do rlly love the mini reveal scenes!!! this is just delish, and cute art too!
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