concave's manga / #Cute Art(23)

ayo!! this is really fucking good actually it starts in the beginning with a goofy, implausible, but fun story (uke's antics, seme's willingness), but then theres a total tone switch in the middle chapters? and at first its a bit offputting but it does provide a totally reasonable explaantion for all the silly stuff at the beginning, and bring u back down to earth a bit. while uke def fucks up here (his whole og intentions), the author reveals it at a part where we can actually see that he starts falling, and also includes a kinda mirrored monologue from seme to show that he kinda catches on? and in the end uke acts lkike a bit of a bitch and it (deservedly, reasonably) explodes in his face, but their argyment is so fucking real and im proud of seme for getting it all out!! he truly is too good for uke, too good for any of us (and i adore him), but ya theyre still together bc uke's explanation is reasonable and real and u can tell hes properly in love now, and then theyre just cute!!! the scenes r all delish and actually uke's too fucking relatable w the introvert stuff :((( i also do rlly love the mini reveal scenes!!! this is just delish, and cute art too!

pretty good!! much better than i was expecting!! i started reading bc i got it in so many recs, but the first time i tried to start i was like "this is ass, art is basic, ml is a FUCKIGN ASSHOLE, idk/gaf how theyre gonna redeem him" then more barrage, and i relented ok so then i read it, and mc just became cuter and cuter w his personality and design!! and while the ml was still a bitch, the hate fuck scenes were pretty good and, it was funny to watch him slowly fall in love, like yay for mc being irresistible pookie! and mc appropriately hated and ignored ml, he called him out everytime he crossed a boundary, and put a stop to things when he saw that ml wouldnt respect him. and i respect that so much. The redemption did kinda eat, it was a r kinda sudden flip (from my pov?), but the actions were all appropriatee and i liked how the ml treated him after he got his personality fixed lol. and now all the couple drama feels apt and has yummy resolution, and a relationship reveal too!! yeah i like this :))) 4.5

hmmmm. interesting premise but child story is meandering tm for me. i like the setting, but idk the setting, and im not rlly feeling any urgency to read this? im curious about how theyll get together but ik thats in ages so we'll see lol