concave's manga / #Age gap(11)

Idk not the biggest fan... recording for accuracy's sake, but I dont rlly like teacher x old student, plus i dont like unwilling domverse, plus I dont like blackmail, plus i dont like crashing at someone else's house. MC's funny so thats a saving grace. Wish we got some more ml backstory (its tragic? vaguely?) so I could empathize/like him more but I just dont lmao

This was rly fucking weird, that age gap was rly fucking weird and seme looks insane. Furthermore the train assault stalker scene and brother scene were totally unnecessary and just were all around horrible for plot and characterization. The art fucking slaps and so did all the scenes, but wow everything else was a dumpster fire…

art is fucking cute asf, rare instacne where i like glasses on a character!! seems very mellow, lowkey, chill so far. I like both seme and uke so far. It couldve been a oneshot but im glad its not. so far im a fan, but nit a higkey fan, a lowkey fan? like the story itself. its just like a littel ficlet to consume before bedtime, that type of thing?

I mean it’s cute! Art eats as always! I rly respect uke, he seems like a great person, and the seme is a bit brash but ig that shows his pasión, his age, and the reason for uke falling. It’s also awkward as hell but that’s a given looking at the set up and reunion bit, but I think it was excecuted in a way that not too to uncomfy

wait wtf i thought this was a oneshot cute thingy... wth is this??? ive been duped???? this is honestly so bad its laughable, the romance makes no sense, the plot makes no sense (there is no plot), the scenes aren't good and the consent isnt there... like genuinely the only redeeming thing is the son??? im so so confused abt why i thought this was a super fluffy oneshot???

I want to hate this but FUCK IT I DONT THEYRE SO CUTEEEEEEE (after the beginning lol). i rlly like how they're balancing each other out (plus seme had his necessary character development) !! NGL his sister was entirely right and if this was irl i would be so on her side but guess what :p we arent irl :p ! I also rlly had fun w the bit where his friends were observing him and seeing he wasnt mr school pres, its a guilty pleasure of mine (watching the show aus, im looking at u!)

i love the cohabitation --> in love aspect of this!! plus im also a fan of the height difference, this is the golden manga to demonstrate that short cute ukes can look like adults!

ok. so i think i get what they were trying to do, but its not working for me? i do love mr uke, he's adorable and funny and driven and pretty and smart, and i adore him. mr. seme, im much more ambivalent about. I obvs canat fault him for his feelings or for turning down uke originally, but i feel like he was so wishy washy later on, and his feelings were too rushed for me? and the car scene/nyc trip were totally an ick imo, like u put in the littlest effort and expect to be accepted like that? and cant rlly feel his emotions? idk i just feel like (esp w the last 2-3 chapters) the author set themself a limit and wanted to get a story done w the "perfect sweet ending" instead of exploring where the characters needed to go. also i wasnt rlly invested in seme bc i didnt finish lover boy when i tried to read it, and i didnt do that bc i thought that was also mid! so this tracks lmao. in the end, mid story, perfect lovely uke, amazing art... itll be like a 3.5 for me?

lmao. ok so just take literally every stereotype and bring it up to max and here you have it! it's kinda nostalgic in that sense? in the sense that its the same story (repacking in new pretty art!). younger poor in debt workaholic naive innocent head-over-heels pretty uke x older rich kinda ugly chaebol uninterested playboy trash rbf lying piece of shit seme akgfdkahgdfkdg. one thing i will say is i like how seme continuously gets jealous! i dont like what he does w that bc hes a conceited asshole but oh well lol. I like the art! pookie mc is absolutely adorable, esp the chibis, and even tho he's crazy stupid (i genuinsly dont see any reason for him to act this way except for the author needing to write a romance), i do like the moments where he shows grit and determination! also the scenes r well drawn... i mean am i the biggest fans of all of them? no absolutely not. but we get good body cuts and reactions, ie the artist knowstheir shit! sad they used it for this. in the sense that its mid, 3, in the sense of nostalgia, 3. 5

hmmm its not bad just incredibly mid tbh. i like the very basic geenral sketch, but i feel like 'love" is too strong for whatever happened for uke, and seme fell just too fast? wish it was more developed, and tbh i think even w the chapter count it couldve happened, idk why it didnt. tbh im vv surprised because i love contradict, its one of my favs, so idk why this is so boring/mid for me