KirzAWriter24's manga / #Beware of Greeks(4)

I really like this one! He showed signs of falling early on and she followed. Really it was more believable than the ones where they fall in love at the end. I loved how the family loved her and she wanted to be apart of his family so much she left before it became too painful.

I'll tell you this much right now. This doesn't have the proper time frame for a person to change, or properly fall in love. But that's just my opinion.

I like this one but I don't really think you could truly fall in love that quickly. But I know, I know it's a story or it has to be quick. Whatever. Even a oneshot spilt into 12 can be accurate and fast.

This is something else.To know your "meant to be" from a kiss. That's kinda stupid. Just say you have good physical chemistry and say you fell for her while you guys were friends but didn't realize it till you made love. Go with that instead. Sheesh. Maybe I should write these.