KirzAWriter24's manga / #Baby/Child(14)

I mean I guess that you could love someone without knowing it.... But.... to use it twice in the same story is really just lazy writing. And really house keeper? You wait till NOW to give him that?

I finished reading it and I was like.... What the fuck did I just read? He was pushing her around till that night. And he was all "you cant be surrounded by men" but immediately gets surrounded by women and doesn't seem to mind. But two times having sex and a party were she realizes she wasn'tto be around him more than people she's met once and suddenly she's in love with him? And he's in love with her? I mean he spent the whole story treating her the opposite of how you treat someone you love.

I like this one but I don't really think you could truly fall in love that quickly. But I know, I know it's a story or it has to be quick. Whatever. Even a oneshot spilt into 12 can be accurate and fast.