Agathe's manga / #cute(301)

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Super sexyy rabbit boy in the first story) - despite the subject it’s gentle and respectful

Homo discrimination contribute to make a painful a self deprecating boy who only yearns for a « normal «  love - a pure love that doesn’t need to hide - maybe it makes sense he doesn’t want to meet the gay crowd as they don’t necessarily play by these rules - although that too is a caricature His partner is a broken sex service worker who just live for his job, but lost contact with real life and real emotions The pace is probably too fast, the first chapter being nonsensical it leaves little room for the relationship to develop , Lastly the characters are maybe a bit too extreme to relate them to reality, although the broken hearted boy who wants to give up love and fear he can never be fixed has some real feel sadly - i suppose it must still exist Nonetheless it’s cute and really fluff, we’d wish for one more chapter further in time to feel confortable

It’s kind of going at two different pace There’s one about grief and a widow There’s one about « fate » But the two never really met - it’s like a concept, there’s no struggle no shift, no real tipping point It’s like there’s a missing chapter, but then, the problem is probably deeper : there are few images to convey loss, but the words are too easily spoken - grief have places that are hard to speak about, silences that cannot be easily broken, pains that never really leaves at places … so that part felt like a idea with few cliches to carry it Far from bad, but not all that deep either … Mmm

2 - too stupid to read