Agathe's manga / #Interesting art & storytelling(1)

20 - the pace is off and the story is rather poor, but it’s adorable, the mix of beautiful art and sd is bringing a lot of fun The beginning is actually way better, because the MC keep blurting ambiguous thoughts which leads to quiproquos and cute misunderstandings - the author doesn’t seem to keep up with that amazing format So it still fun, yet a bit ordinary - the visual impact of the MC bubble (for exemple pink flowers and green butterflies becoming dull mites) - or the double dialogue (sd for the mind and unspoken thoughts) can be truly excellent - let’s hope for more of that kind of level :)