Bump Up Business
Destined to Meet on the Trends
Cute and Light. It could have been so much better if there wasn't so much needless dialogue leading the reader down a path that abruptly ends without fail. What I LIKED: The management team. Absolute comedy gold. Wish they were explored further. The commentary from the online community. Such an original aspect to have them be recurring for each trend. With a seemingly organic feel to it. The art was well done a bit of a throwback. The plot was solid, however it lacked a great deal as well. What I did NOT like: Lack of cohesiveness and development of the plot. Felt chopped/edited all to hell. Dom/sub aspect. It was awkwardly-cringey and forced into the story. Ultimately, unbelievable. The CENSORSHIP is unreal like you have too obscure their lips when kissing? Unfinished unstable/vengeful ex. It was the main plot driver yet was abandoned The interactions between the MCs was too brief generic and extremely tame to really sell the romance even to the reader.
Prejudice