Hellerstern's manga / #smut(200)

Interesting but the story is not really deep. Reading the second story made everything make sense. I really liked the relationship between Tada and Makoto. It was kinda cute. Shima and Yama were good too, but I didn't really feel too much for them even though they are the main couple. Also some things they said in the story didn't make sense and I think it's because of translation issues. Anyway the story was okay.

I unexpectedly liked this story a lot more than I thought. After reading the prequel I wasn't expecting much but everything was piece back together and explained really well in this. I really liked the past story of every couple but my favorite past story will stay and remain Daikichi's (Daichi). Daikichi is just the best character. I really liked his story, his character, the connection everybody had, the story behind the shop, just EVERYTHING compared to the first story (the prequel). The characters and the story had a little bit more depth, which made me fall in love with it more. It was really a nice story even though there are things that were a little bit off. On the last note, the author draws really nice and firm bodies.

I didn't expect it like the story that much when I started it, but the story just turn out to be amazing. The writing of the characters was well done and felt really realistic. Even the portrayal of the whole situation felt plausible. However, I'm still confused about Chang and his feelings. I didn't know if they were for his dead brother or for Ed (Yeowoon). It wasn't quite clear to me. Also, I didn't like Ed blaming Glenn McQueen (Creed) during their fight after the news on tv. I mean he never forced him into pornography and he could have know better that at some point everyone would know that he was doing it. Even though he was totally wrong, I could understand his reaction. That what made this show so realistic to me. The portrayal of emotion. It was very human and relatable. But I'm still mad at the fact that Glenn apologised first for what he said when they had that fight. Overall, this was sort of a masterpiece.

I started this story thinking it won't be that good, but I was totally immersed in the story the more I read. I completely fell for the love between both characters Geum Hoo eand Beom. Their love was so overwhelming I could litteraly feel it myself. The author did a very good job with this story. Pratically every chapter there was a sex scene but it was boring or redundant, I think those were really well written and draw. There was also substance to the story not to big of a plot but the story developed well. I was really sad when Geum Hoo died first and then Geom carried him to the westeria tree and died himself while holding him in his hands. That whole chapter had a huge impact on me. I also really liked their flowers talk. It gave me butterflies. Anyway, that was a really good love story. It was amazing and I really liked it.

The story was unexpectedly ok. I wanted more on the servants story (Sadek and Rabi).

I think the story was good, though it ended abrutely. I kinda wanted to see more since we still don't know why Suzuhara killed someone. And I wonder what's going to happen with their relationship going forward, I mean Asahina is a prison warden and Suzuhara is a prisoner incarcerated for murder. I think that maybe the author didn't know how to continue from there judging from the characters backgrounds.

Interesting concept. Wish I saw more of their relationship afterwards.