Double Trap
The story was quite interesting until maybe around halfway through. It was really confusing to know which personality Yura was in control and which one was actually the main one. I think even now I'm still not sure, but I think is the night one. Jinsung really should've talked to Yura about his personality disorder from the beginning or at least talk to Jae Pil about it when he came help Yura. Seeing Jae Pil and Hyunmin together was kinda cute at first but it became weird after their first meeting because it felt like the author changed Hyunmin's personality and he removed his glasses. After I got used to the change, iI thought they were ok, but I feel like they could been better written. There's something that kinda bothers me with Yura. The fact that he see Jinsung as a kid and still treats him like one, but at the same time want to have sex with him, kinda creep me up a bit. I find it really weird. I know it's partly because the have an age gap of 6years and they met when Jinsung was in elementary school or something, but still it makes me uncomfortable. Also, the sex scenes were kinda good but some elements of them were just too much (The crying, the overload of moaning, the expressions, the "no"s, the talkings), maybe because the author's drawings had a sinister/creepy/gloomy vibe to them. Actually the overall vibe of the story was dark to me, except some moments. Anyway, the story was ok.There was a lot of things I kinda didn't like in this story but I found the concept really interesting.The author originally just wanted to draw some smut, so it wasn't meant to have a really super detailed plot.
Knife (CHIBA Ryouko)