Hellerstern's manga / #Alpha x alpha(4)

The story was a little bit confusing in the beginning but I wonder if it was a translation problem. Other than that, I kinda liked the story. I wish we saw them switch though.

The story was a bit confusing in the beginning with all the flashbacks. It is the first omegaverse with SM that I read and I think the idea was interesting. I kinda liked the story but not too much. Colton and Jinwoo were just heartbroken and somehow fate just reunited them. I kinda like how they kept meeting back over the years. Another problem that I found with this story is that the characters didn't show their love for each other enough or didn't even mention it specifically. It's only at the end that we hear Colton say I still like you even if you're a mess. I would have liked to see more of their emotions. One last point, the author draws amazingly well, the body proportion, the muscles, the stance, the angles were all very well drawned. PS: The side story was really cute. I like how they so in love with each other and got to live together by the end.

Basic overused plot of "assaulting you because I love you shit".

This story was so good at the start. I really liked how Karlyle progressively fell in love with Ash and their date becoming sweeter and sweeter. I thought the story will end when they got back together and professed their undying love for each other, but it surprised me to see more chapters to come. I think the story kinda drag on a bit which made it too long. I guess it makes sense to see them finally in a proper relationship and everything, but I kinda wish the "not in a relationship perio" would've been shorten a bit if we were going to get the "in a relationship period". Overall, the story was nice and sweet but there were some cliché things I don't like like in every other story. What really ticked me was the fact that towards the end Ash engaged in Bdsm sorta play without even prior discussion with Lyle to know his boundaries or if he'll be okay doing that sorta things. That was really off to me. Some author should stop just adding random shit like that without adding the proper way how to do them. Another thing that kissed me off was Karlyle misunderstanding things by himself and getting sad/mad about Ash's ex. That was so annoying I could barely enjoy the rest of the story.