Yuunagi Marbled
It's a good read. It starts innocent and takes a dark turn. Brings an extreme situation of homophobia(probably realistic where this takes place culturally) I'm interested how the main character will affect the mental state of her significant other. I'm hoping the author will surprise us and not pull the "I won't leave you"/"Don't be afraid to trust in someone". If you read this, you started something relatively unique, I hope your ending will be the same! Good luck
Strawberry Shake Sweet - Zlay Bomb Tour (Doujinshi)
It was a nice read. Kinda puts taking advantage of someone whose intoxicated in a cute light?
Touhou - Maiden's Heart Is Still Immature (Doujinshi)
The stereotypical idiot character that's interested in food kinda annoying But I like where the story was going. Could have been a nice ecchi manga. Nice art as well
Touhou - Marisa Alice and the Textbook of Love (Doujinshi)
Really pointless but in a cute way. I'd like to see more
Touhou - Cirno to Reimu no One Two Three (Doujinshi)
I'm not really a fan of the art but the story is pretty cute. It couldn't personally hold my attention past the first chapter but I can see the appeal
Yuri ni Tanpopo
This was definitely different from other Yuri I've read because it shows some view from a straight(AND ONLY STRAIGHT) character looking from the outside. Not much cutesy crap and no nude scenes. It brings about realistic problems that homosexuals deal with in modern Japanese society and concludes with a realistic and relatable solution. Its a short read but its definitely worth taking a look at. If you don't like real-life problems this isn't the manga for you. But overall, I appreciate this work very much!
Lilith (Sirius)
Huh.. wasn't expecting that ending to Chapter 1, but it kept me hooked. I like the characters you've laid out and I can already predict how it's going to go. I am hoping you surprise me. I personally like that you've added a seemingly strong main character as opposed to the weak shy ones typically placed in yuri manga.
Informal Romance
I can't say I'm a fan of the artwork. But I don't necessary think its bad. I see you're trying to go for the innocent and air headed route and introducing a serious and professional character to even it out. However(maybe it's the translation) the dialogue goes way to quickly. I got the jist of what's going on but some parts I needed to do a double-take and even then, it's still confusing. This manga already seems pretty predictable although I hope that's not the case. But I look forward to seeing your story develop and hope to give more stars in the future. Keep up the hard work.
Her ShimCheong