Yuunagi Marbled
It's a good read. It starts innocent and takes a dark turn. Brings an extreme situation of homophobia(probably realistic where this takes place culturally) I'm interested how the main character will affect the mental state of her significant other. I'm hoping the author will surprise us and not pull the "I won't leave you"/"Don't be afraid to trust in someone". If you read this, you started something relatively unique, I hope your ending will be the same! Good luck
Saki - Endless Repeat (Doujinshi)
Very short but cute. worth the quick read
THE iDOLM@STER - unit (Doujinshi)
Love this. the art is really nice looking and the story is enough to keep me interested. The translation is kinda ruined with the third person talk
Psycho-Pass - Monmon (Doujinshi)
I really love the artwork. It's very well done! I can see the story unfold and it would be interesting to see you develop it from here. It looks like it would be a juicy yuri read. Good job
Tsurezure Biyori
I love the art I love the characters. They're lovable and sync well together. I agree that it seems more shoujo but there are hints of yuri in it. I think it's too early to tell. I hope it develops. I also enjoy that its extremely clean and innocent. Good job
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