Legs That Won't Walk
Royal Servant
Re:birth
5 chapters. Complete. This was good. Extremely painful in certain ways but ... beautifully done. It's absolutely worth the read. Omegaverse done differently.
Unlucky Cupid Messenger
Unfinished Business
60 chapters. Complete. Okay, this one is rough. While I liked the story itself mostly (art, dialogue, etc), I have issues. First, he was ALSO a child when they were separated. Second, no questions asked just assuming the other kid purposely abandoned him to a horrible fate. Third, he force changed his dynamic (wow). Fourth, there was...a lot of r@pe. I mean...a lot. It became exhausting to see the MC endure so much over and over again. As usual, it gave me the Stockholm Syndrome vibe at the end. I realize they were childhood friends - perhaps even fated mates given their initial reaction to each other - but to forgive your repeated (brutal) attacker without time and therapy feels cheap and unrealistic. He broke his ankle FFS. Make it make sense. Again, the foundation story is good. The art is lovely. But writers have got to figure out better ways to portray these things without glamorizing it. It's not sexy or cool. It's just r@pe and torture due to a misunderstanding between CHILDREN.
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