Emmie's manga / #Yaoi(428)

*If future me ever comes back to this manga* GURL STAHHHPPP!!! This manga was just all around bad, like besides the sex scenes there was no good part, I mean the seme did rape him and honestly if the seme was following the uke when he was walking home and SAW THE OLD MAN GRAB HIM why didn't he stop it? Your just gonna sit there and watch your bf get attacked? and then say how mad you are that he let the old man see him like that? Like whaaaattttt??? What sense does that make? This author seems like she's very good at artwork and sex scenes but not so much the actual plot of the story, another thing why did we have to see the seme fucking all those other people and telling them how much he liked them, it just kinda ruins the rest of the story, cause you, the reader, are just like 'wait does he really care?' and it just leaves a bitter taste in your mouth. I don't care what anyone says, this relationship is NOT healthy, but at the same time this is fictional, and it's yaoi logic, I'm not trying to tear anyone down who likes this manga it's just to me, personally, there were so many things wrong with it I couldn't really enjoy it.

Besides the smut this manga wasn't really good in my opinion for anything else, I think what really ruined it for me was ch. 5 like that was so random and sad????? I felt so bad for the guy, I mean to watch while someone else fucks the person you like that's just terrible, at least pair him with someone else then! The main story was okay but I felt like the seme just used him when he was bored and didn't really love him, it was more like he loved being comforted by him??? Idk, I could've interpreted it wrong but still I didn't like it, especially when he was like 'I knew I loved you when I couldn't get hard for anyone else.' And the uke just melted and was all happy like seriously??? That's the love confession you trying to give him????? You couldn't have thought of any better choice of words???? If I was in the uke's position I would've slapped the shit out of him for leaving me and then saying that after showing up out of nowhere. The last story with the yakuza I actually thought was the sweetest, I think that was the only reason I didn't hate this manga, it was sweet and fluffy, maybe that was the author trying to make up for ch.5 being so sad?

Broke my heart but made me smile

I just read the sequel and now my rating is 1 star fuck all the weird shit