AyaRin39's manga / #Family/Child(2)

Little girl has neglectful brother and hires other guy to take on role. Heartwarming since he cares and gets her over to friends and family. I cried so fucking much. That poor girl. She didn't have to think about others so much. She is a child goddammit. Let her think about herself. I don't forgive her brother at all. I know he suffered, but how could he do that to a child? I am in pain. 08/10/22

FL is adopted by ducal couple since she looks like their deceased daughter. Brothers bully her, but she endures until ready to marry. Goes back in time though. Is annoyed since can't leave house and has to quarrel with children but grows closer to them. Parents die anyway though Aunt comes to house and bullies FL. FL doesn't trust brothers, but they eventually find out and help her. Brother struggles to keep family under control as siblings stay with friend's family for a few years. Then the reunite and navigate noble society. ML has fiancee, who loves prince and eventually gets with him. Engagement broken and he confesses to FL. Slow romance. Worried about reactions and brothers find out Random noble lady hates FL and troubles her numerous times. Tries to kill her duringhhunt and is caught. Arrested for life Suddenly evil aunt and uncle show up again and free girl to make her attack ML, who pretends to be hurt I really like the story and did so ever since first reading it. But I feel like it's a bit too quick and episodic sometimes. Scenes suddenly end or switch and important events happen far too quickly (like death of parents and time skip) Interesting family dynamic. Brothers are all interesting in their own way and conflict with parents is important too. Trauma seems to make all of them neglect or abuse each other. Not an excuse though. I find that the parents really messed up, and I personally wouldn't forgive a brother for pushing me outside in the snow either Also don't know why FL just let aunt beat her. She could easily have avoided that issue instead of enduring it for no reason. She also doesn't communicate when her brother's fiancee and the prince fall in love (brother doesn't love fiancee, so she could break off engagement and be happy) The story has some jarring plot twists, including that they inserted communication orbs into the story and never used them again. Also don't know why the siblings couldn't meet during time skip. Seems odd. Antagonists have no agency and are comically evil. Don't know why ML (who allegedly kills do quickly) can't just deal with them before they cause issues I knew who the ML was before but still wasn't fond of beginning of romance. It happened too quickly without any changing signs. Also feels odd since ML suddenly started saying super possessive stuff. Don't like that the other brother likes her too and that all family members seem to adore her and have no other connections in life Feel like the regression part was unnecessary. The story mainly progressed as it originally did anyway. The last story points felt odd, a bit too boring and simple. The enemies were weak and the plot twist about FL being noble (apparently added in manwha) was never hinted at. Overall strong beginning but quite weak end 11/05/23