Fraiser's manga / #slice of life(114)

Visually, it's really boring to read. Lots of monotonous panels used of the same shot, same size, all distantly drawn. Panels are all very crowded, though this could be interpreted as cozy or claustrophobic. This is all paired with big and abundant bubbles of speech. Concepts felt cute & simple & at times cliche.

Dumbass Logic

All characters feel human. Does so by focusing on their emotions, internal logic & thinking. Focuses on ALL characters including the background characters. Well done portraying only female character as well!

Fun crazy concept

Cute, simple, & real. Too real it comes off as bland, & un unique uninteresting concept. No spark, no zing. Frustrating actions of characters.