Mr. Fiction
SO. *folds hands* I like this author's work alot! It's always super hot, passionate, & ultra lovey dovey! This had steaming hot sex scenes which I loved! (Her sex scenes are great ) BUT! This had cheating. Look, I thought the NTR was hot, but in terms of story, the way it was handled was NOT! It was glossed over completely. & Thanks to info from another reader we know that some pages are missing. Now granted, maybe they actually talked about the cheating between this gap, but we honestly don't know. It's actually really hilarious because all we see is that they go from middle of arguing and being really angry, to the next page, like a hard cut of them licking ass in these graphic poses
Oujisama no Seitai
Visually, it's really boring to read. Lots of monotonous panels used of the same shot, same size, all distantly drawn. Panels are all very crowded, though this could be interpreted as cozy or claustrophobic. This is all paired with big and abundant bubbles of speech. Concepts felt cute & simple & at times cliche.
Boku no Kawaii Stalker