Fraiser's manga / #Dumb Logic(54)

UUHHHHHH??? A lot of crazy of crazy events happening with rushed pacing, no set up or hints, or much explanation. Like I would have liked to know what Jimmy & Henry's new jobs were, how does this pill work, how does Henry even have the knowledge to create a fuckin pill?, & More about their new life. Some writing was just plain bad. Like the solution to the beast people discrimination was to have them conform! Visually, it gets pretty bad at the end. Alot of easy to draw close shots were used, we hardly ever got the camera pulled back to see the distance. Also, the shots in general we're really bad in terms of visual storytelling through the end. I like that this tried to include different tones. It seemed to want to have slice of life, BL, & action. That's an interesting idea.

The worst shit ever

Dumbass, plot with characters doing roundabout actions which seem underhanded & sleazy to their partner.

Even for a comic that is meant to be lighthearted, not enough thought put into making the internal logic of the world work in terms of writing, & visual execution of story is horribly bland. Nothing really exciting in the characters either.

Poorly drawn smut with uninteresting character dynamics & zero story even though the concept kinda promises in the beginning. Execution of story is terrible. Since there is no exploration of the surrounding would outside of the two main characters, it feels claustrophobic & suffocating too read. In addition, it stressed on much longer than it should have if it was made like this. Should've kept it to a few chapters. Oh, also dumb logic on the characters' behalf for making frustratingly stupid decisions.

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