Fraiser's manga / #Badly Executed(67)

2020s? Shounen ai Mc gets is rebirthed thanks to a goddess to live his life again. This time around, hell make sure to avoid what bright him to ruin the first time, specifically the evil emperor! Update: So, everyone can agree that Rebirth has a compelling premise, but CANNOT follow through with it's weak storytelling. The execution is bad. Ideas get dropped & they don't get explored enough. The emperor didn't really have much of a redemption arc. There was no beginning, build up, climax, then end with the MC's feelings. I feel he easily accepted him. These are some of the things that bother me. 2/26/22. So the story finally ended. It was not executed well at all. There were several plot threads that were forgotten and never answered. It had a lot of potential that led nowhere. The execution felt lazy most times. You can tell when someone has given up. I say this because most shots are very similar (always limited to face or waist up shots) & the art could be sloppy at times. That being said it was so cool concept idea and for that I enjoyed reading. I like that it had a happy ending. I still enjoyed this even though it's not perfect.

2020s? Due to a piece treaty, two countries formerly at war have an exchange program in which a member of the royal family visits each other's country. The princes get a bit too friendly. The mc must navigate this new country & new relationship! It has an interesting concept. All exposition is shallow however, needs more meat on them bones. Drawing style is neat, technical know how needs work. Visual storytelling needs work. Panels can be confusing because shots need to be pulled back in order for us to see more information, also better angles chosen as well.

Nah this isn't good. Tries to ship him with the antagonistic, cruel master. Why??

Didn't finish. It's really silly.

Sweet, big framed boy falls for stern, cold model. Update: The concept of this story is interesting. A young man, severely abused as a child makes a career out of being a model, but ironically cannot look himself in the mirror due to body dysmorphia from his trauma. Sweet, big framed boy is there to help him realize his beauty. I'd love to see character heal with the help of therapy & support from main character.

2021. IM DONE! THIS WAS CRAZY!! GARNET, STOP. DON'T KEEP READING THIS! Edit: No I'm not done. I'm on board for this crazy ride. One thing I liked was that I felt this was a truly scary depiction of an abuser which leans more on the realistic side for this genre. It really has left me with a lasting impression. One thing I didn't like, was how the sex scenes were sexualized since most of it felt forced. Though I know that is part of what we came for. I was uncomfortably invested! So much tension! I want to know what happens.. Waiting for updates.....

Sucks. It's nonsensical. The characters' actions don't make sense. They don't react like humans or with common sense. Comes across as annoying.