Fraiser's manga / #Badly Executed(67)

Interesting concept, interesting/ loveable characters, has promise! Just some poor writing decisions & execution decisions!

The worst shit ever

Extremely unspectacular & unoriginal. Everything was cliche. Even their expressions & reactions. Nothing special.

Even for a comic that is meant to be lighthearted, not enough thought put into making the internal logic of the world work in terms of writing, & visual execution of story is horribly bland. Nothing really exciting in the characters either.

Dumbass, plot with characters doing roundabout actions which seem underhanded & sleazy to their partner.

Poorly drawn smut with uninteresting character dynamics & zero story even though the concept kinda promises in the beginning. Execution of story is terrible. Since there is no exploration of the surrounding would outside of the two main characters, it feels claustrophobic & suffocating too read. In addition, it stressed on much longer than it should have if it was made like this. Should've kept it to a few chapters. Oh, also dumb logic on the characters' behalf for making frustratingly stupid decisions.

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