velocity's manga / #complete waste of my time(3)

dropped at chapter 10 uke stalks seme, turns out seme is some kind of a gangster. they fuck, then seme torments uke a lot, uke does nothing but just whines and obeys. 10 chapters and literally nothing interesting happened. who comes up with stories like that? and it’s yet another story where the characters fuck in chapter 2, when i know absolutely nothing about them, so why would i even care? the characters seem to be walking cliches and stereotypes, uke being whiny and seme being… insane? like he switched his personalities more often than his own socks i presume, yet he still didn’t seem to have any personality at all. seme also seems to be this gangster at night but student at day, and he has a whole ass house filled with his gangster men. and yet, uke didn’t even spend one second questioning how any of that was even possible. like why is he a gangster? who are these men? why did he beat up that man in chapter 1 and how come no one suspected anything after beating up that student in chapter 10? really, really boring and a waste of my time.

Wow. I don’t think I’ve ever read a webtoon worse than this one. It’s so stupid and nonsensical it actually becomes funny at one point. It’s an equivalent of a wattpad story written by an edgy 14 year old who thought they just had the best idea in the world and no one had ever written anything as good as this. I don’t think there’s really anything to say about this webtoon. Even trying to review it would be a complete waste of time, because the only way to improve this story is to just delete it altogether. The plot was ass, the characters were ass, the plot twists were ass, the sex scenes were ass, the artstyle was ass. And the pure exposition in the extra chapters felt as if I was reading author’s personal notes about this story, but they didn’t know how to convey this information in any way, so they just copy pasted it into the actual webtoon. Absolutely phenomenal storytelling. Especially the part when the MC tells the reader that even though he lost his memory twice, he still remained gay, and that’s precisely why he got a girlfriend. I refuse to believe anything in this story was written seriously. Also, with the amount of literally the most direct and blunt explanations we’re given at the end, no one mentions who the fuck that blond chick actually is. It’s kind of implied by the psycho guy that she’s that blonde guy from the MC’s high school years, but at the same time everyone else says he died and neither the characters nor the story itself ever denies it. So who the fuck was she? The psycho guy told the MC that he decided to kidnap only the people who made the MC’s life a “living hell”, and then there’s this random ass girl whom he keeps in one of his rooms and it’s never even explained. It’s probably one of tons of inconsistencies and straight up nonsensical things that were brought up in the story just for funsies and never with the intention to explain them, but I just couldn’t care less to memorize anything else. Anyway, I think that the fact that this story went through all those editors at Lezhin, got accepted and then fucking published on a website where you have to pay your hard earned money to read each chapter, serves as a good reminder that no matter how stupid you think your idea is, it’s still probably better than this one. So go for it, write that silly little story of yours and make your dreams come true. If this garbage right here got published, then literally anything can. 0/5