First time reading a gl one shot and here are my thoughts about it. In the beginning it wasn't half bad, it felt a lil creepy but it was still bearable ig. But when the sex part came... idk it just put me off especially when the black haired girl was clinging onto her, felt kinda creepy to me. Ik I read yaoi and I don't excuse this kinda stuff in them too.
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