DeepWater
Ch12: why did she wear a string ch52: So they get thought a lot of thing ( they dad died, they ger beaten by the Union) and this guy want only fight sea monsters? I know we need a story but my first thought was to build a safe place to live with my family.... That's why the story has no personal perspective. It's just a shonen like deadly sins and else. But the theme about the sea change, so let's continue a little and thank you Kana is not in string anymore
Duke Pendragon
Ch19: making point. 1) OK we lost the black hair/eyes to keep the blond/ blue eyes... 2) How many times will we force with this Lady? She came disgusted by him to broke her engagement but with 2 seconds she fall in love with the new personality of the Lord.. stop with thos fakeg love is boring and I didn't understand the utility to keep her so long in the story. Well I suppose she will still be there again and again... even the servant of the Lord is more interesting than her, please go to the next girl and let's that lady. 3) I thought we will have like 15-20 orcs... but they're only 4... a big fuss for nothing. 4) The granny is the best 5) after reading the big comment ( thanks to him ) I will drop this fantasy, it's really not my type. I like fight, mystery, here is more romance
The Uninvited Guest On My Shoulder