Kemono wa Okumade Aisaretai
eeehh I get that the uke is supposed to be a bonafide twink and a sheltered one at that too, which is why he's so immature, but boy this one is just too immature, it legit feels like I'm reading shotacon; you can't say that it's because he's a puppy/dog beastman either coz his dad was one too but he turned out alright, plus the number of times "daddy" was mentioned here was just so off for me, and not just because it has perverse connotation while he's innocently using it as a term for his father, but also because it once again, amplifies his childishness. Shame coz he was really cute and I like that he's assertive, I just don't like it when ukes are too childish, so childish that they can pass off as a literal child and then have this overwhelming sexual vigor at the same time, it's icky. I like the seme enough, he has his moments of weakness, but he can reason with himself. The main tension and conflict was a letdown tho, like the butler just resolved everything like he pulled magic out of his own butt. High rate for the art style.
Kemono wa Oku made Nakasaretai
This is infinitely better than the previous story. I like the dynamic and the pacing, the plot and drives make sense too. The uke wasn't immediately drawn to the seme and actually developed his affections, the seme too took his time with him and is a genuine gentleman, like legit gentle through and through and not just gentle on the streets but possessive freak on the sheets, he's considerate of the uke AND others which is probably why he never comes off as suffocating but rather calming. I really like this, fluffy and easy read.
Shitsuke ga Nattenai