Nope3008's manga / #Strong Female Lead(4)

Okay so the ml was so innocent and cute he makes me want to read it again. I also really like his coloring. The translation made it hard for me to understand the plot in its entirety. I think I need to read it again to fully understand or just buy the raw with a more accurate translation. I love all the puppies and puppy behavior. For various reasons it wasn't translated very well that the ml was slow as they put it. I would have liked it if they conveyed his special needs nature a little bit more? That wasn't translated well at all... it just seemed like he was a wolf in a human's body and unaware of human nature which is normal in these types of stories, but from the comments I guess that was supposed to be him being special needs? Well, it just didn't come across that way. Also the FLs problems with the relationship wasn't translated very well either until the very end. One one thing that I wish was addressed was why did he come into her room in the first place? It could be obvious but I like to see it. There was also mention of a baby, I wish we could have seen the baby. I also really love the angle of the two virgins discovering each other's body, it was sweet. Edit: after reading some of the comments, I didn't realize how poorly the ml was treated. That's because of the poor translation TBH. The things that just didn't make sense to me, I just put it out of my head? I even completely forgot that the older brother beat him the next morning. I also forgot that at the end the FL said that she was using the ml like a toy until some people mentioned it. That did not translate very well at all... It seemed like they both were into it and benefiting, but I guess not?

To think this is where it all started. I can see the reflections of all the different BOF from this. It always annoyed me how Makino never gave in to her female pleasures though. And how we never got to see them live a happy peaceful life. Also that haircut is really annoying. 4* because the translation were awful and the strips were out of place sometimes

This isn't a continuation and the F4 are rarely in it. It was almost like the same story repackaged. It was still cute tho and worth the read.

The endingstory was rushed. I didn't like how the female alpha was basically a man with long hair and boobs. It was nice seeing byul tho