nyanekosensei's manga / #interesting(6)

How do I go about it...hmmm...if I were to say the execution could've been a little better. I liked the story but I didn't like how it was executed. Idk what it felt like for others but I found it very strange because one second everything is going real slow and the other second I find the plot moving at the speed of light. I know it's a piece of fiction but I still find it surreal how he just got over his old crush within a few chapters, it felt rushed to me because I had an old crush and I think somewhere deep inside my heart I would never be able to let go of it unless I meet someone else and spend a lottt of time with them. Now, that might be because they've met before in the past but still it just felt a bit strange to me. Also, I don't like how the uke gets like angry at the seme and just in the next chapter they make up. The plot pace felt like it was terribly fluctuating and I fancy that their emotions could've been expressed in a more efficient manner. I liked it, yes I did, because I've never read something similar to it but I think there might be better ones out there than this.

The story is truly heartwarming. It's about acceptance, it's about love, it's about friendship, it's about the importance of family in one's life and lastly it's about overcoming the ordeals one faces- not just imposed by the world but inner conflicts as well. I really loved the story. Although I found myself wondering about what kind of illness LiHuan has. I pray for all there is to pray to that it's not something serious. I'm also sad that he apparently forgot Yuyang's birthday and how their relationship may have lost its initial vigor but it's quite understandable. I wish someone could explain the illness part to me and if it will have a continuation or some kind of justification.

The story was overall quite overwhelming but beautiful. There were some parts that made me cry and some that made me laugh. My only complain is Kiyomine...There were some parts where he frustrated me a lot. I love the mc, he owns up to his mistakes and apologizes unlike a certain someone who just expects to be forgiven and won't listen to others' explanations but his character is just like that and nothing can be done about it. Kiyomine doesn't allow anybody to cross his boundaries however is completely alright when he himself crosses Takara's boundaries which also ended up hurting him many times for which he never verbally apologized. Sometimes he was extremely insensitive if it were me I would also find being with a person like that exhausting. It's weird that someone who always gets into fights can never stop his ex-girlfriend from kissing him and the author abused this trope of Takara catching him kissing his ex multiple times.

I'm usually okay with dub?con but somehow I didn't like the seme. See his expressions? bruh that is sexual harrasment from every angle and I don't like how the uke didn't call the police on him.