The Flower of Aloshya
This is quite enjoyable. I was pleasantly surprised by how quickly taken the Duke was with Kay. I like that Kay isn't a moral police..he is definitely a playboy though. Kissing her because Helena was crying so sadly in his own words. He has never loved anyone truly it seems. He was raped by the Duke but we're blowing past that with a quickness. I do like the premise and the money hungry, quick witted Mage as well. The others are just bleh.
2020
Everything was going fine until you raped him. Goddamn mophead why'd you do that? I like their dynamic, even though there's a huge age gap, their relationship feels very equal. He even dropped formalities around him and does whatever. Mophead just bears it. I like the snut scenes here. A 10/10 if I'm being honest. Now about the Deok guy, he has a school girl crush on our MC...it's so funny seeing him looking out for him while bullying (I use this lightly) at the same time. He's the only one who knows about his condition so far. Can't believe the ML caused that, he's gonna feel extra shitty once he finds out. Another thing I like is his grandma...she's so cute and caring, I love how when he found out that she's his real grandma his attitude towards her changed. Also I wonder if his mom's spirit hanging around him is a major plotpoint or just done as a gag. Also the MC has a fat ass. Ch33.
Cherry Cake
It's not much fun. I don't like how naive the uke is even after countless warnings from his grandma and blatantly ignoring all the red flags. He's going out of his way to create a situation for the alpha to have his way with him. Also I feel like this is my first time seeing an alpha who isn't possessive. He even told uke to fuck someone since his hole was too tight for him and it's a pain fucking a virgin. I already knew they were going to use the heat cycle as an excuse, when he didn't eat his suppressant...it was bound to happen. He's just fucking dumb. Also the alpha being a loan shark/gangster doesn't intimidate me...maybe it's because I've read so much yaois where the tops there are much more intimidating but this is so flimsy. I hate that he knotted in him right away...Is he going to be pregnant? I worry about that since the alpha doesn't have much affection for him yet so he might see them as a burden. Since apparently abortion is out of the picture. CH21.
Scandalous Wedding