Tinay.tinapay's manga / #Drama(13)

It has a lot of potential but the pannels are confusing and the story some how isnt riped. There are a lot of scenes that is unnessesary

I cannot express how Gontaku-sensei is soo good with her illistration. Even if you son't see their faces the expression is clear even with out too much dialouge. The pannels is perfectly timed. Im always a fan of manga with not so much dialouge